Kia ora spencer i really liked it that you learned personal information that you should share online. And i really liked it that you did an appropriate photo,you talked about atumn and the Winter haiku poem.
Your autumn poem was pretty cool.. I like how you stuck to the haiku poem rules and how the picture you chose kinda matched the words in your poem. Maybe you could have used a different colour for the words so they stood out more? A very nice piece buddy! Keep it up :)
It's great to see you share your learning. I enjoyed your poems. It would be great if we can see more of your posts on your learning Keep up the great work.
Hi Spencer, really nice haikus. Maybe you can put these three presentations on different blog posts so you have more posts. In you winter haiku, there are few mistakes. The first sentence doesn't make sense. The last sentence has only 4 syllables. Maybe you can edit these as well. Yuvaan rm22 NWS
Kia ora spencer i really liked it that you learned personal information that you should share online. And i really liked it that you did an appropriate photo,you talked about atumn and the Winter haiku poem.
ReplyDeleteMorning Spencer!
ReplyDeleteYour autumn poem was pretty cool.. I like how you stuck to the haiku poem rules and how the picture you chose kinda matched the words in your poem. Maybe you could have used a different colour for the words so they stood out more? A very nice piece buddy! Keep it up :)
Kia ora Spencer.
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see you share your learning. I enjoyed your poems. It would be great if we can see more of your posts on your learning Keep up the great work.
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Hi Spencer,
ReplyDeletereally nice haikus.
Maybe you can put these three presentations on different blog posts so you have more posts. In you winter haiku, there are few mistakes. The first sentence doesn't make sense. The last sentence has only 4 syllables. Maybe you can edit these as well.
Yuvaan rm22 NWS
I meant in your winter haiku.
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